Answer the following questions in regards to the following article
Are the questions and issues that motivate the writer clear? How can this context be clarified?
What is the writer’s thesis, his/her main argument, focus?
Has the writer effectively related the conversation that published writers are engaged in? How so? What work remains to be done to better contextualize the writer’s thesis?
Is the writer addressing the audience’s concerns effectively? Anticipating counter- arguments?
What passages of the draft are most effective? Why?
What passages of the draft are least effective? Why?
As a reader, I suggest this writer focus his/her revision efforts in this way: ___________
Respond to the writer’s specific questions.

Note: you will needat least 300 wordsto response appropriately and substantively.